 RobertMcDade
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Date: September 17, 2005 @ 1:45 AM
 You were right, I like this one a LOT better. You definately touched up on it. Still got that slight dark feel to it which is great!  This one sounds a lot cleaner than the other one and it flows easier on the ears for some reason?? Again, great stuff, keep at it! 
 
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 TheElf
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Date: September 17, 2005 @ 9:42 AM
Dark tones over a thumpin beat. This is good stuff son!! I really like the style of this. Nice vibrato or LFO effect on some of those tones. Awesome
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manz
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Date: September 17, 2005 @ 11:42 PM
hehe ye more suspence in this one  and it sounds more organised than last time good work keep it up
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Chu-Deezy
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Date: September 18, 2005 @ 7:14 PM
This 1 is craccin', i like it, tha drum sounds a lil' borin' tho' maybe switch up tha snares sumtime wit a double hit n tha same wit tha drums, maybe take a few or all of them out 4 like a bar or to leavin' jus' tha snares. jus' a thought, but yea i like it tho' fo cheezy
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 hantu
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Date: September 19, 2005 @ 12:48 AM
 hmm yeh this one is better, the melodies make alot more sense, on the other one i found myself a bit confused on what was going on... but i don't think the drum pattern flowes that good with it or maybe its the drum samples i dunno.
i think what would suit this type of melody would be a very echoey snare/click or should i say reverbed and a hihat/something here and there. and the double kick in the middle of the loop i think you should take out, maybe i dunno try it... and at the begining the beat could differ from the main beat, like maybe one kick per loop... just some suggestions don't take them too literally.
But yeh... well done, coz it has definetely improved, i like it when people improve something even if its just a little, its a sign of effort and willingness to adapt for the better... which is kool in my book ... erm i think that made sense 
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realmouse
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Date: September 25, 2005 @ 3:08 AM
This one sounz better  nice job.
Who's doing the lyrics and vox?
That would make it sound even better.
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Anythanggoesent
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Date: September 27, 2005 @ 4:19 PM
I like this one ...nice work...don't be scared to add more to the beat
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 GTOriginal
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Date: November 10, 2005 @ 6:20 PM
WTG Ami, Really dig the keys and after the first couple seconds it sounds a bit scary. Well produced and I diggit. 
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